Tuesday, November 13, 2007
Hero
Friday, November 9, 2007
//HERO//
heros
What is your definition of hero
What Is Your Definition Of A Hero?
What is your definition of a hero?
What is your definition of a hero?
Thursday, November 8, 2007
Define Hero
Hero
Heroes
Hero
Heros
Hero
Hero
a hero
Wednesday, November 7, 2007
Monday, November 5, 2007
Question 2 closed for posting...
Friday, September 21, 2007
MDG & COA Question
I think most people want to be in real life too but, there's a lot of people that allow negative influences or other negatives corrupt them and make them not be themselves or think differently then a normal good person would be. For example: My best friend Simone let drugs and other negative people affect her life and now she is in rehab and in drug programs and she wants to be a good person but, now she has no choice on what she wants she an addicted drug abuser and needed help. I've talked to her since then and she broke the need and got back to a normal life and lives as a good person.
Wednesday, September 19, 2007
Question #2 answer
I see people that are like Zaroff and Montresor. I heard about some guy on the news that killed two people because he thought it was the right thing to do, because they were weak or weren't like him and thought they needed to be removed from the world. When people are pushed around or think what they do is right, it's like they have tunnel vision, you can't get their attention off of it.
Tuesday, September 18, 2007
MDG/COA Question
I think people really do want to be good, but certain events in their lives could cloud their judgment. Like in the story of The Cask of Amontillado, Montresor was angry because he believed Fortunado insulted him and he felt a need of getting revenge. There is also another story, the Most Dangerous Game, wear General Zaroff believed killing people wasn’t a crime. He probably believed this because he has been hunting all his life, and because he was a general he probably killed many people in wars, so when he became bored with all that he thought of that atrocious idea.
In real life I believe it is the same way. Everyone would like to be good, but things can happen to them that can change the way they think. For example this isn’t the case all the time, but a friend of mine from grade school was born in a rough neighborhood and became accustomed to selling drugs or stealing. It isn’t that he chose to be this way but the circumstances around him led to it. That’s why I think becoming a bad person is based on events that might have happened to a person in life.
MDG/COA Question
Some people just get really jealous. For example, let's say your friend bought these new shoes. She asked you what you thought of them. You really did like them, but you wanted them for yourself. So caring only about yourself, you told her they were ugly and went and bought them. You were trying to do a good thing, but you made it better for yourself.
Monday, September 17, 2007
MDG/COA Question
I always want to be good and do the right thing, but i don't always do the right thing. No one is perfect so we make mistakes, but we always want to do the right thing. To be good you also have to want to be good. When my parents want me to do something for the most part i always do it but some times you just get lazy and do the bad thing by not listening to them and leaving what ever it is undone.
Friday, September 14, 2007
Question Number One Closed
****PUT "QUESTION NUMBER ONE RESPONSE" AS YOUR POST'S TITLE****
Part I: What part of the writing process do you find the most challenging? (Pre-writing (brainstorming), drafting (putting words to paper), revising for quality, editing for errors, or publishing your work.) Explain which part is the hardest for you and explain why you struggle with it.
**Note: You can choose more than one part of the writing process, but you need to explain why each part you choose is hard for you.
Part II: What do you think you could do to improve your skills in that part of the writing process? (Be specific. Saying, "I could practice more," is not going to be specific enough to answer this question.)
Wednesday, September 12, 2007
Ques. No.1 Response
Sunday, September 9, 2007
Question 1 response
to get better at it i could work on being more creative.
Friday, September 7, 2007
Question #1 Response
If i had a better understanding of plotting it would be less difficult and i would be able to write my stories in a better form and be able to organize all my ideas so that my story will make more sense and improve.
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I really dont like writing I would rather type it. I struggle thinking about what to talk about. I wish to write easier. I hope this teaches me to write better.
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The second part that is hard for me to do is editing my own work because even when i re-read it it still makes sense to me always. I'm not sure what i could do to improve this, I think what i could do is keep it for a while, such as five minuets, and then re-read it so i can get used to it.
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I think i could improve by not going ahead in my writing and brainstorming.
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I can improve my skills by practicing more on how to edit my errors. I can write some papers and correct my answers that were wrong and keep doing that to improve so I can get better. For me to get better on publishing i can practice on some articles. Also, I can get some help from a tutor. I need serious help in publishing so I am going to try my best. Hopefully someone can help me through my weakness.
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Because sometimes i find it hard to relate to the situation or remember something that happened that relates to the topic at hand. I also have a hard time with drafting when I'm writing because, I can't think about what to put onto the paper when I am writing a response to a prompt or even when i write freely I have a hard time expressing myself in a way I feel is correct. I also believe that if I really put forth some effort I can improve in my areas of weakness. Such as, reviewing new techniques of drafting and some advice about brainstorming.
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To help my self I think I should study hard and listen in class.
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To improve my problems i could probably just focus more on what im working on at the time.....
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I could study my notes from class everynight as well as do my homework assignments posted on this website.
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I could improve my skills by writing more. For the pre-writing i could try making just webs and outlines. For the editing i need to learn more of the grammar rules and where commas can go.
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Question 1: Be sure you answer BOTH parts of the question.
Part I: What part of the writing process do you find the most challenging? (Pre-writing (brainstorming), drafting (putting words to paper), revising for quality, editing for errors, or publishing your work.) Explain which part is the hardest for you and explain why you struggle with it. **Note: You can choose more than one part of the writing process, but you need to explain why each part you choose is hard for you.
Part II: What do you think you could do to improve your skills in that part of the writing process? (Be specific. Saying, "I could practice more," is not going to be specific enough to answer this question.)